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Really enjoyed this Chris. Brought to kind some parts of Silo with the yearning for “old” technology but a great slant with the loss of speech and it only being possible through the weird hybrid of machine and man. That cyberpunk side of it made me think of Cronenberg and some of his body horror movies. Looking forward to seeing where it goes next 👍🏼

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Wow. What an incredible comment to read! Thank you. Definitely feel like I'm swinging for the fences with this one so I'm glad it's well received!

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Oct 2Liked by Chris Patrick

Some bizarre, yet somehow logical, concepts here, Chris. Far more complex that anything I, myself, could write. I look forward to the next part!

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Thank you Sharon! Bizarre but logical is absolutely the best feedback to have here; I always wondered if the concepts were going to be too out there but delighted with this response.

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